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Post  jinettyx Fri Jun 22 2012, 03:33

Waiting….


I’m waiting for a parcel
It’s supposed to come today
I got up really early
Something special was on its way

I’m looking out the window
I’m jumping up and down
Excitement comes to grab me
But instead it leaves a frown

I’m waiting for a package
They said it’s on its way
I wish that they would hurry up
I just can’t wait all day!

It usually turns up early
I’ve been dressed for hours now
Waiting by my window
In the hope that van will show

I’m waiting for a delivery
I wonder why it’s late
I’m busting for the toilet
But am holding on…oh mate!

Come Mr.parcel man
I’m fretting now its true
I dare not leave this window
F’fear of missing you!


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Post  Lucie Fri Jun 22 2012, 09:43

been there..done that. Great ode , flower. you've got this one all wrapped up!
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Post  peewee Fri Jan 11 2013, 23:11

I have a special package
For a lady down this street
She's been looking out every day
So today will be a treat

I don't know what is in it
But then its not my affair
I bet she'll jump up and down
By the time that I get there

It isn't really heavy
But its bigger than my bag
So its sitting on my van floor
With a little paper tag

I have a special package
That I will deliver soon
Running a little behind time
But should be there by noon

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Post  jinettyx Sat Jan 12 2013, 05:46

Love it ...you clever sausage!! hahaha! clapping
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Post  Lucie Fri Mar 01 2013, 00:46

I heard a parcels coming
And I'm eager too to see
I heard this lady's at the brink
As so excited she might pee

So I'm waiting by the back hate
For a pair of shorts and legs
An' when I sees I'll jump n pounce
I'm not one who sits n begs

It is a street tradition
When the postie comes on by
To nip him at the ankles
Letting all the letters fly

But today is something special
I must surely leave my mark
So I'll grab the ladies parcel
Run off n bury it in the park!
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Post  jinettyx Fri Mar 01 2013, 09:56

...hahaha!....she wouldn't dare!!!!


Great writing Looby......nice little saga going on here! Like sunny heart
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