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Post  Dori Sun Jan 01 2012, 19:57

WAITING


Sitting here waiting for just one word,
even an E-mail knowing all is well with you.
Still can't find your phone as I tried calling,
but you have it turned off.

Are you awake or still in a deep sleep,
Waiting is one of the hardest things I have to do.
I know "no news is good news,"
Just to know if you're awake is all that I want.

Going back and forth to see an E-mail the from family,
letting me know that all is well .
One little sentence that says "his eyes are open !"
Would make my New Years day a good one.

Sending you a message that the time has come,
you have slept long enough please open your eyes.
To know that you're awake and wanting to hear from me,
Letting me know you have missed me too.

Reaching out to you with my mind,
touching you on your shoulder
a whisper in your ear letting you know I'm near.
A soft kiss on your cheek and on your lips,
soft as a butterfly's wing light as the breeze.

Just to have you open your eyes to look at me,
Though here I sit so far from you.
Wishing just for a day I was there sitting beside you,
Holding your hand in mine till you are awake.

Hear my whisper call to you that it's time to awaken,
feel my touch on your shoulder that arouses you.
The feather like kiss on your lips,
Yet here I sit and .............wait.


(For Michael)

© January 1,2012 BY: Dori Maschke


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Post  Dori Mon Jan 02 2012, 18:59

Found out today he (Michael) had a stroke, he's not in a coma but he's still unconscious, and is in the critical care ICU, and his son found his phone.


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Post  jinettyx Thu Jan 05 2012, 03:32

So sorry to hear your news Dori...I hope all turns out well.
Your poem is truely beautiful. BIG hug give flowers
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Post  Dori Thu Jan 05 2012, 11:16

Thanks Jinny, glad you like it.

I heard from him last night, he is doing great he need P.T. (physical therapy )For his legs, other than that he's fine and ready to leave the hospital.




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Post  jinettyx Thu Jan 05 2012, 14:57

So glad to hear it Dori....Best wishes for a speedy recovery being sent from all of us at Bp. xx
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Post  Cheryl Brickner Thu Jan 05 2012, 15:38

Dori,
So sorry to here the news....
Michael will recover....God does answer prayers!
Hugs,
Cheryl
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Post  Fred West Fri Jan 06 2012, 07:50

Hi Dori so sorry to hear about michael but you know we are all praying for him.
You just reach out to God and His strength until you can get those words tht tell you he is safe staysafe yourself my friend.
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Post  Dori Fri Jan 06 2012, 13:53

Thanks everyone, he is healing more every day, he just needs to get his legs working again.

Thank-you also for the prayers, they are working, I to have been praying for him every day.

We are looking forward to him being able to come back here this spring, late time he was here was Thanksgiving day, we are so missing each other.
And yes, we know what we have IS real, we do love each other so much.
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Post  RichieO Fri Feb 10 2012, 14:45

So sorry to hear about your Micheal hope all goes well and a full recovery is made. Love your poem Dori, you take care.
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Post  Lucie Wed Feb 22 2012, 00:48

Keep up the strength Dori, for both of you. Best wishes for a speedy recovery and a long overdue reunion.
Take care my lovely and a beautiful poem.
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Post  Little Owl Wed Apr 04 2012, 06:16

Your poem touched me deeply as I am a stroke victim myself. Sometimes recovery is slow. I hope Michael is improving daily. Your poem was beautiful and very touching.

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Post  Dori Wed Apr 04 2012, 15:23

Thanks everyone, sorry for not letting you know sooner, he is well back on his feet and like me causing his daily troubles, one bad thing tho he wants to go back to BULL RIDING, yes about 6 yrs ago he used to ride the bulls, at the rodeo, I call him my "bull riding, truck driving, motorcycle riding, cowboy" he has 3 or 4 horses as well. lol hug Thanks group hug
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