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The Unfair Race

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Post  alitnobani Fri Mar 08 2019, 17:05

The Unfair Race Ll__10

Written by: Ali Taha Alnobani
©️ Ali Taha Alnobani

I am sad

While I am here rolled in a narrow case

My songs were waving in the space

The street kicked my steps

Dead dreams stole my lips

Why they deceived me؟

That is not life

It is an unfair race
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Post  Fred West Sun May 05 2019, 08:03

Nicely done
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