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jinettyx
Teresa Jane Price
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The World Beyond
In the darkness just before dawn
I find myself listening to the crickets' songs
As the glowing orb sinks to sleep
Till the stars spread across the sky.
So it's morn and I arise to a new day
Where waters flow clear and calm
Down the ditch shaded by oaks
That tower the newly sown corn
That's a feast for the murder of crows.
The world beyond my window
Touches me with its breeze
While hot coffee adds to the routine.
I find myself listening to the crickets' songs
As the glowing orb sinks to sleep
Till the stars spread across the sky.
So it's morn and I arise to a new day
Where waters flow clear and calm
Down the ditch shaded by oaks
That tower the newly sown corn
That's a feast for the murder of crows.
The world beyond my window
Touches me with its breeze
While hot coffee adds to the routine.
Teresa Jane Price- Author
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Re: The World Beyond
Beautiful description of a new crisp morning....Loved every word!
jinettyx- Author
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Re: The World Beyond
Pondering what lies just beyond our windows can make for some lovely discoveries. Excellent poem and a good read. Keep up the good work. Don't forget next month (April) is Poetry Month, so please come to our meeting if you can make and bring some your special poems. Love to hear you read them. Take care.
Mike
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Re: The World Beyond
Beatifully said, I love catching my breathe in the mornings! :)
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The World Beyond
Great writing, love this fresh morning coffee too!
Hugs,
Cheryl
Hugs,
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Re: The World Beyond
Just exactly how I love to start my day. I enjoyed your poem.
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