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The World Beyond

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Post  Teresa Jane Price Mon Mar 26 2012, 08:54

In the darkness just before dawn
I find myself listening to the crickets' songs
As the glowing orb sinks to sleep
Till the stars spread across the sky.
So it's morn and I arise to a new day
Where waters flow clear and calm
Down the ditch shaded by oaks
That tower the newly sown corn
That's a feast for the murder of crows.
The world beyond my window
Touches me with its breeze
While hot coffee adds to the routine.

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Post  jinettyx Tue Mar 27 2012, 00:59

Beautiful description of a new crisp morning....Loved every word!
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Post  mikeschultz Tue Mar 27 2012, 07:08

Pondering what lies just beyond our windows can make for some lovely discoveries. Excellent poem and a good read. Keep up the good work. Don't forget next month (April) is Poetry Month, so please come to our meeting if you can make and bring some your special poems. Love to hear you read them. Take care.

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Post  Lucie Wed Mar 28 2012, 23:27

Beatifully said, I love catching my breathe in the mornings! :)
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Post  cheryl.brickner Mon Apr 02 2012, 12:31

Great writing, love this fresh morning coffee too!
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Post  Little Owl Wed Apr 04 2012, 06:38

Just exactly how I love to start my day. I enjoyed your poem.

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