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Post  peewee Fri Feb 10 2012, 23:48

Night time dilemma






I spend all day just shaking
Dreading as the hours go by
I cant stop watching the clock
No matter how hard I try

The worst part of my day
Is as it turns into night
I try so hard to stay awake
But it always is a fight

I dread it when its bedtime
I dread the thought of sleep
You’d have to be here to understand
The feelings go really deep

But I guess I have to face it
Regardless of what I said
Fatigue just takes over
And I have to go to bed

So I say good night to the snakes
The hamster and the rat
But the worst thing about going to bed
Is putting out the cat






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Post  Lucie Sat Feb 11 2012, 01:10

Picture really throws the punch line. like it! Like
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Post  peewee Sat Feb 11 2012, 01:57

That's what I get up to at 05-30 in the morning on my day off doh
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Post  mikeschultz Sat Feb 11 2012, 08:13

Nicely done. I like the humorous ending. Smiles are good things to share. Thank you. Mike
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Post  peewee Sat Feb 11 2012, 08:23

Thanks Mike
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