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Post  jinettyx Tue Nov 01 2011, 02:44

Bonfire Night


People all huddled around a big fire
In the cold, in the dark, in a field
Lots of Oooh’s, lots of Ahhh’s
As they look to the stars
Lots of frozen, pink fingers concealed.

Deep within pockets, or warm woolly mittens
Bobble hats clamped tight on their head
Well, when all’s said and done,
If this is called fun
I would rather be tucked up in bed!

Silly, daft people, in a field, in the dark
Watching a firework display
Spending their ‘dosh’
On a whole load of ‘tosh’
As it goes up in smoke in one day!

All animals suffer at this time of year
They’re not allowed out for a pee
They shiver and shake
Like a mini earthquake
Because of the noise, don’t you see?

As you can see, I don’t mince my words
But each to their own, I suppose
Well, you’ll never see me
Setting light to a tree
Or risk getting frostbitten toes!

This bonfire night, please be careful
Keep you’re animals safe for the night
Keep your hand in your pocket
And not a dud rocket
And keep all your children in sight!



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Post  Fred West Sat Nov 05 2011, 11:37

absolutely brilliant It is a warm night no rain the fireworks rain down from the sky
sausages and burgers eaten by all
look at the fireworks one and all
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Post  mikeschultz Sat Feb 04 2012, 16:52

Well envisioned and portrayed. I felt as if I were there. Very nice work.
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Post  jinettyx Sun Feb 05 2012, 04:53

Thanks Fred and Mike for your kind comments xx
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Post  peewee Mon Feb 06 2012, 00:30

Nicely Very Happy
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