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Post  jinettyx Mon Feb 13 2012, 01:27

Where art thou Valentine?


At my window
Here I sit
With my heart in tatters
Alone, for it be
My destiny
Where romance
Never matters.

Broken heart
Broken promise
Broken all by you
Forsaken love
Forsaken dreams
Forsaken all by you

At my window
Here I sit
My heart
Like knotted twine
I ponder on
What could have been
Where art thou
Valentine?


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Post  Lucie Mon Feb 13 2012, 06:21

are wonderfully sorrow...nice writings JIn x
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Post  mikeschultz Mon Feb 13 2012, 06:53

Ah, the bitter anquish of hurt and longing. Well done. Quite emotive.
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Post  jinettyx Mon Feb 13 2012, 08:46

Thank you so much....xx
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Post  Fred West Fri Feb 17 2012, 05:50

you sum it up very nicely lol well done
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Post  jinettyx Fri Feb 17 2012, 07:41

Thankyou Fred....now your turn..Lol! Very Happy
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Post  Fred West Fri Feb 17 2012, 09:46

I twisted the hankie round in my hand, didnt know if i should sit or stand,
so i opened the card and there it was a heart in red that said for you
after that i didnt feel so blue
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Post  jinettyx Fri Feb 17 2012, 14:16

Lol..Marvelous!!!
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