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None as strange as folk
None as strange as folk
Well at the front of the bus
We have Mr & Mrs Shrek
At first I thought it was nasty
But they are so what the heck
Then we have the spinsters
They must be eighty years old
Never had a sniff of a man
Let alone caught a cold
Then we have the tight arses
They've been like it since birth
Accounting for every penny
Debating what things are worth
And then there's Ex bus driver
Always has a lot to say
Every thirty seconds
"I wouldn't have come this way"
Behind me moaning minnie
Muttering all day long
Never happy with anything
Always finding something wrong
The rest of them are OK
You never hear a peep
Their either dead or dying
Or maybe fast asleep
© 2011 Pee Wee
Well at the front of the bus
We have Mr & Mrs Shrek
At first I thought it was nasty
But they are so what the heck
Then we have the spinsters
They must be eighty years old
Never had a sniff of a man
Let alone caught a cold
Then we have the tight arses
They've been like it since birth
Accounting for every penny
Debating what things are worth
And then there's Ex bus driver
Always has a lot to say
Every thirty seconds
"I wouldn't have come this way"
Behind me moaning minnie
Muttering all day long
Never happy with anything
Always finding something wrong
The rest of them are OK
You never hear a peep
Their either dead or dying
Or maybe fast asleep
© 2011 Pee Wee
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Re: None as strange as folk
Peter . . . your poetry is getting so good. You are growing in producing such natural writings. Thank you for this . . . it's beautiful!
PS: and cute:-)!
bev
PS: and cute:-)!
bev
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Re: None as strange as folk
Ahh Bev thank you
I just write it as I see it
I just write it as I see it
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Re: None as strange as folk
Well your eyes are getting stronger . . .
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Re: None as strange as folk
I agree with Bev, the flow of your poetry is beautiful ! Well done Sir !
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Re: None as strange as folk
tickling tummy laughter..thank you pete, great free-flowing poems, as always
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Re: None as strange as folk
Ahhh...Country folk...they be funny little critters!!! Nice one P...always good for a titter!!
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Re: None as strange as folk
I dare you!!!! :D
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