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Post  peewee Sat Mar 05 2011, 06:07

Tears on my diary







Tears on my diary
The pages soaking wet
Looking back at the life we had
How much harder can it get ?

All I have are memories
Of things we used to do
Written in this little red book
All I have left of you

So many entries
Something in every day
Right up until the third of June
The day you went away

The flowers on my Birthday
The kitten when I was sad
Even all the silly things
You’d do that drove me mad

I could just close the book
And wipe my eyes dry
Can’t turn back the life we had
No matter how hard I try

But I’m glad I kept a record
Of what we did each day
Even though it makes me cry
I will read it every day





© 2011 Pee Wee

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Post  AFriend Wed Apr 27 2011, 17:47

This is very sad. You are a good poet:-)
Have a nice day.

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Post  Dori Wed Apr 27 2011, 18:22

That is so very sad in a beautiful way of writing about it...well done Pee wee
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Post  alitnobani Tue May 17 2011, 15:23

peewee wrote:
Tears on my diary






But I’m glad I kept a record
Of what we did each day
Even though it makes me cry
I will read it every day





© 2011 Pee Wee

My friend , I will read this poem more and more, because it touches my pain.
Very nice poem.
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Post  peewee Tue May 17 2011, 15:58

I am didn't write this with anyone or anything in mind, but it just felt right as it grew.
I'm glad people like and can relate to it
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