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Post  Sue McDonald Sat Apr 20 2013, 18:43

I'm stuck inside, with you I'll hide
You'll stay with me, stride by stride
I think your friendly, maybe tough
You've been with me, through some of the rough

You keep me down ? You keep me quiet ?
Your my friend ? Ok, I'll buy it !
If this is right ? To, ''Do Not Tell'' !
WHY ? Are we going through this hell ? !

It feels like quick sand, pulling me down
But your my friend, you'll be around !
I have to ask, are you protecting ? or,
helping make me, throw the net in ?

So ? Really, you are not my friend ?
You are there ! And you pretend ? ....
to care for me, yet keep me quiet
You say it's safer ?! I say you lie !

I'm going to talk ! I'm going to tell !
Going to have to put myself through HELL !
Through it all, I'll bloody show you !......
The friend to me ? ! Is sure not you !!!



© By Sue McDonald.......Sadly written in the 70's ......... 21/04/13

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