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Post  Robert Anderson Mon May 21 2012, 02:24



Jack , Jack , Jack  Jackoo11


This poem is simply Jack

Anyway , most of you don’t know me but I’m a very handsome monkey
My name is Jackoe . I just got up this morning ,(hold on me bum is itchy) and was looking for me little red and yellow, duck jodhpurs , when I and came across this rather nasty video, me dad left around . And I thought the person in it is black and so am I and then me poetry juices ran riot but really I am cuddly monkey, sorry dad for stealing your password and wallet. If you check, you can have your wallet back I stuffed it up your nose to stop you snoring , I’ think it is empty but check the driveway, watch out for banana skins and follow the yellow skin road , that porches is YOURS , happy birthday , the yellow one , well I had it replayed. Anyway back to me cos he is insignificant. And has a hairy nose ….. Anyway here goes ……………eh? I hope I don’t get caught .
Hold on I am putting the video on
Dum de doo de dum dee doo!
Some guy called Isaac Plays

Who is the monkey that would risk his neck for brother monkey
Eh?,,,,,,,, Jack
I am trying to keep up

Who is the monkey that won’t cop out when theirs danger all about

Jack?
Can you dig it

They say this monkey is a mean Mother ( I cant say the next word)

Hey! your talking about Jack

He is a complicated guy and nobody understands him like his Nessy

Jack

Jack, Jack

Well that’s all the words to this

I need a sleepy and a cuddle , sorry about the puddle ,

Night, night

I'm a monkey with a cause

© Jackoe Anderson , all rights deserved




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Post  jinettyx Thu May 31 2012, 04:39

Well done Jackoe.........nearly as good as yer Dad..Lol!! ( did he find out?)
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Post  Robert Anderson Thu May 31 2012, 05:20


Jack , Jack , Jack  Jackoo12

Hiya xxxx Eh? what ye wearing ?? If yer so impressed with me Shaft ...eh? sorry that did not sound to good . But ye got to remember the Repo man has just came for me Porsche . I hid it in the duck pond . Anyway to make money fast I just wrote this . I hope me licence don't expire first. Me nose is itchy mmmmmmmm the places you find worms . I think I will keep that for later. anyway here goes.

Turn Up The Volume

Turn up the volume
And turn down the pain
If I knew the words to say …

Broken shadows in wine
A canvas on the run
A camera that burns in the sun
A tree that falters to a water colours run

Broken nights
And wasted mornings
All this tossing and turning
With a tong as dry as the bark on a tree
Starlings don’t sing for me
,anymore
My door is getting old
And I feel so cold
With stories to be told
In arms you could unfold
,to a warmth of summer

Movies without coherence
And surviving through endurance
Just to touch your face
And see your smile emplace
, again

To take away your pain
Walk with you in winters rain

Caress you with my fingertips
And search for your lips
Under blankets of love and warmth
That sway like a meadow to your heart
In muffles of breath
That sigh to the touch of your thigh
To capture a canvas through your eye
Is all a man/ eh?…….Monkey can dream
In paint that forms to a cream
But washes so clean

To a stain that still survives

© Robert Anderson 2012
© Jackoe , he is always steeling my work







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Post  jinettyx Fri Jun 01 2012, 08:37

Haha! that's one talented monkey you have there Bobby xx
I reckon he's probably got a fan club too!
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Post  Lucie Fri Jun 01 2012, 08:55

cool chimp of cheeky monkey.. i guess he's got it all ape'ening!
will we have more of this Top Banana?
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Post  Robert Anderson Fri Aug 17 2012, 07:38

Ye wee carpet rat , that is copywritten GRRRRRR! git or your on your peg .....
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