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8/25 A Picture is Worth a Thousand Words
Let's go simple this time around.
Let's think visual . . .
Below are several photographs and images. Pick one and write a poem or shortish story.
Have fun!
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My Darling little Boy
My darling little boy
My darling little boy
Was standing at the door
Trying to turn the handle
Was hard as he was four
I had a lot of friends
Visiting with me
When he burst into the room
Shouting “MUM I WANT A WEE”
I gave him some advise
That I told his older sister
Don’t say wee in public
Say Mum I want a whisper
I didn’t tell my husband
He works night for heaven sake
I didn’t see any problems
As he’s hardly ever awake
He had some friends round after golf
They came round for a beer
The next thing he came into me
Looking pretty queer
My son had walked in on him
Remembering what I told his sister
Walked up to his father Saying
“DAD I WANT A WHISPER”
Wish I had told his dad
Wish I had made things clear
As his father in front of everyone said
“Well son whisper in my ear”
© 2011 Pee Wee
My darling little boy
Was standing at the door
Trying to turn the handle
Was hard as he was four
I had a lot of friends
Visiting with me
When he burst into the room
Shouting “MUM I WANT A WEE”
I gave him some advise
That I told his older sister
Don’t say wee in public
Say Mum I want a whisper
I didn’t tell my husband
He works night for heaven sake
I didn’t see any problems
As he’s hardly ever awake
He had some friends round after golf
They came round for a beer
The next thing he came into me
Looking pretty queer
My son had walked in on him
Remembering what I told his sister
Walked up to his father Saying
“DAD I WANT A WHISPER”
Wish I had told his dad
Wish I had made things clear
As his father in front of everyone said
“Well son whisper in my ear”
© 2011 Pee Wee
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LOLOLOLOL!!!! Oh my land that's too cute! Pete, ya done it again:-) Thanks buddy! Loved it .. . .
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Re: 8/25 A Picture is Worth a Thousand Words
Ha that one is easy lol
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Re: 8/25 A Picture is Worth a Thousand Words
Hahahaha! Peter I so loved this one
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No time to spare
Don't bother me just now dear
For I haven't got the time
Can't you see it's started raining
And my washing's on the line
Don't bother me just now dear
For I am busy...can't you see?
And I have to go out shopping
To get some sausages for tea!
Don't bother me just now dear
Can't you see I'm running late?
I've lots of things to do right now
So be patient please, and wait
Don't bother me just now dear
Watch the t.v. for a bit
For if I haven't done this ironing
Your Father's sure to have a fit!
Oh, alright then...stop your screaming!
One more shirt and I'll be through
But I can only spare a moment
For I've the cleaning still to do
Okay, what's so important
Oh my word!...what have you done?!
There's a wet patch on my carpet
Now you're really for it Son!!!!
For I haven't got the time
Can't you see it's started raining
And my washing's on the line
Don't bother me just now dear
For I am busy...can't you see?
And I have to go out shopping
To get some sausages for tea!
Don't bother me just now dear
Can't you see I'm running late?
I've lots of things to do right now
So be patient please, and wait
Don't bother me just now dear
Watch the t.v. for a bit
For if I haven't done this ironing
Your Father's sure to have a fit!
Oh, alright then...stop your screaming!
One more shirt and I'll be through
But I can only spare a moment
For I've the cleaning still to do
Okay, what's so important
Oh my word!...what have you done?!
There's a wet patch on my carpet
Now you're really for it Son!!!!
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My Darling little boy
Pete that is , an d i have to say "cute" . you're a marvel .loved it.
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no time to spare
Jinetty, what can I say, one of your on-form poems- just like the old days. so good your writing again xx
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Oh my work is never done ha ha ha ha
Nice job
Nice job
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Re: 8/25 A Picture is Worth a Thousand Words
Jinetty, I love this piece! Me thinks you've done a combo of BlaBla AND the bare-bottomed boy . . . that is wonderful and really shines on your creativity.
hugs, bev
hugs, bev
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Old and Gnarled
Old and gnarled, but here I stand
Upon this green and pleasant land
Surrounded by this scenic view
I started as a shoot ,then grew.
A new and tender shoot, I once
Full of myself - of confidence
Young and healthy - strong and bold
( Who would think I'd get this old?!)
Graceful branches reaching high
I grew so tall - I touched the sky
But now all that is in the past
I'm withered now - twas not to last.
My boughs grow heavy - each passing year
I'm not as graceful now, I fear
And with each season, I now grow weak
A dying tree, I hear you speak
I'm old and gnarled, but still I stand
Upon this green and pleasant land.
Upon this green and pleasant land
Surrounded by this scenic view
I started as a shoot ,then grew.
A new and tender shoot, I once
Full of myself - of confidence
Young and healthy - strong and bold
( Who would think I'd get this old?!)
Graceful branches reaching high
I grew so tall - I touched the sky
But now all that is in the past
I'm withered now - twas not to last.
My boughs grow heavy - each passing year
I'm not as graceful now, I fear
And with each season, I now grow weak
A dying tree, I hear you speak
I'm old and gnarled, but still I stand
Upon this green and pleasant land.
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Re: 8/25 A Picture is Worth a Thousand Words
Like a beautiful stalwart, the tree still stands. Wonderful writing Jin. This is truly a beautiful poem. Thank you!
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Re: 8/25 A Picture is Worth a Thousand Words
the little critter was there within the hand
I had picked it up off the sand
it smiled and i had to grip it so
what do i do now ?? just let it go??
I had picked it up off the sand
it smiled and i had to grip it so
what do i do now ?? just let it go??
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Cute Fred:-) I'm trying to write bout that little one too! Keep resting our friend. I believe you'll be fine with more time. Don't be scared, Fred!
hugs, bev
hugs, bev
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Truth in Consequences
When Irene came squawking,
just going at it awalking -
running her yap with all that talking
and I told her to shut her mouth.
Don't do no good I know
cause her likes got a roe to hoe;
wish she'd take the mouth home and STOW IT in a can.
Pfffit something about the postman,
a gram from Uncle Sam -
her sister Diane crying -
and I don't listen too close,
but she got blabbering
and asking for an aspirin
and I quit grinning when I saw the tears.
She's the boy crying WOLF! -
always stumbling under foot
but she had her proof
and handed me the news.
Mick got killed over there.
Irene knelt in prayer and all I did was stare
and feel bad in my soul.
Made up my mind
I'd listen to her cry
and stood there and sighed as she blabbered on . . .
© 8.28.2011 by BC Williams
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Nice to see you haven't lost your touch Bev
Nice work
Nice work
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Well thank you Mr Pete! I'm not satisfied with the second line, actually the word awalking. It ain't a word I don'ts think, lol! (when did THAT stop me:-) But I was trying to keep it tight and didn't take the time to work it through.
Thanks amuch!
Thanks amuch!
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Nice one Bev....good to see the bard in action! Lol!
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WOW !!! Re:- All of the above poems !!!
Pete, Bev, Jinetty, Fred, beautiful writing.......I miss my writing ! Think I'm losing the ''knack'' or just don't seem to have time at the moment will really try and get in here ..but ....well done guys .....beautiful writing talented people, beautiful !!! big hugs.....
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Thankyou Sue.....and great big hug straight back at you!!!! xxx
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My ''Mixture''
Rows of people clapping
at the kitten as he dances
to the music in his headphones
lost in vibrating music trances
Theres a little critter watching
laying in someones hand
''look at him'' the critter say's
''he's listening to'Bla Bla' band''
The bears can hear the music
as they stand on tippy toes
looking through car window
where the radios playing same noise
The little boy was dancing
all innocent and nude
when suddenly the coldness
to his bladder did intrude
The mother who was watching
gave a silent smile and sigh
as the child she had raised
reached for the handle high
All around music of nature
critters kitten bears and child
and the cutest little butterfly
flew past grand old tree with style
© by Sue McDonald 29/08/11
at the kitten as he dances
to the music in his headphones
lost in vibrating music trances
Theres a little critter watching
laying in someones hand
''look at him'' the critter say's
''he's listening to'Bla Bla' band''
The bears can hear the music
as they stand on tippy toes
looking through car window
where the radios playing same noise
The little boy was dancing
all innocent and nude
when suddenly the coldness
to his bladder did intrude
The mother who was watching
gave a silent smile and sigh
as the child she had raised
reached for the handle high
All around music of nature
critters kitten bears and child
and the cutest little butterfly
flew past grand old tree with style
© by Sue McDonald 29/08/11
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Re: 8/25 A Picture is Worth a Thousand Words
I sort of cheated and tried to tie them all together !!!!
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Re: 8/25 A Picture is Worth a Thousand Words
Sue, this is COOL as a cucumber dipped in alcohol and shoved into an industrial freezer! Holy moly . . . When I saw the blabla band I nearly fell off my chair:-)
Man, this is sweet! Thanks Sue, you HAVE it . . . come back and share it some more.
Big, sloppy huggies!
Man, this is sweet! Thanks Sue, you HAVE it . . . come back and share it some more.
Big, sloppy huggies!
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