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Post  peewee Tue Aug 16 2011, 08:47

I’m a mouse for god sake



Been looking for hours
At the same blooming spot
I really is tempting
Should I try it or not

They put down fresh every day
I’m tempted but never try
It’s the spring thing I don’t like
I’m just too young to die

Dad did it once
His words were “ never fail”
But the spring thing went off
And messed up my dad’s tail

I know that I am hungry
But things aint got that tough
I guess the cake and bread crumbs
Will fill me up enough

I don’t care what they tell me
About this credit squeeze
I’m a bloody mouse for god sake
But I don’t have to eat cheese





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Post  BC Williams Fri Aug 19 2011, 03:43

Very cute and wonderfully imaginative, Peter! Good writing:-)

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Post  peewee Fri Aug 19 2011, 07:11

Thank's Bev I was challenged to write something about Cheese lol
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