Hard but fun

peewee Wed Jul 13 2011, 19:58

This is hard to explain so I will show you

Try and do the same as this

Left or right

Left or right what to choose
Either way I just cant lose
But making the choice gives me the blues
Which side should I take

Left or right its really tough
Time in the day I don’t have enough
Been thinking so long I’m feeling rough
Make a decision for heaven sake

Left or right its child’s play
I do the same thing every day
If I cant choose I’ll chuck them away
Even started keeping me awake

Left or right its getting late
Got more important things on my plate
If I’m not there soon the bus wont wait
At my whit’s end give me a break

Left or right which one is worst
Maybe inspiration will come in a burst
Which leg to put in my pants first
Not the hardest decision to make

© 2011 Pee Wee

peewee Fri Jul 22 2011, 13:29

Come on give it a go!

BC Williams Sat Jul 23 2011, 07:29

I'll try sometime this weekend, in the wee hours of the night, when I can squeeze in a bit of time, cuz I KNOW this is a very good prompt! Sorry Peter, just so busy:-)

peewee Sat Jul 23 2011, 07:31

How is the house coming on sweetheart ?

BC Williams Sat Jul 23 2011, 08:14

Slow . . . we're working hard. The yard on Parker is a foot high, so you know what we'll be doing when Poppy comes in . . .

peewee Sat Jul 23 2011, 08:17

Good luck lol

BC Williams Thu Jul 28 2011, 19:29

Yikes! I got the pattern wrong . . . aaab, bbb . . . SHOOT!
Okay, it's aaab, cccb, dddb and so forth. Ahhh . . . maybe before the end of the year:-)

Sue McDonald Mon Aug 08 2011, 16:55

ok not quite getting what we have to do ??? blank moment ...? maybe !!!! Just not seeing it !!!! Help?? !!!

peewee Mon Aug 08 2011, 23:00

There I have made it easier for you. Read it again and pay attention to the last words and the first lines

BC Williams Tue Aug 09 2011, 07:34

Denial

LINK► Denial © Copyright 2001, MeloD

If I were to come and help you,
if I were to come and undo
all your denial instead of letting you stew
in your thoughts, then you'd never see,

and I'd know I've done you a disservice.
Wouldn't that make you nervous?
Could you stand as an unwavering edifice
or would you mindlessly mimic me?

I cannot loose for you your reins.
I won't lift the weigh of self imposed chains
that burden you with ascetic pain -
because you my friend, must learn to foresee . . .

© 8.9.2011 by BC Williams

peewee Tue Aug 09 2011, 07:41

Very nice Bev but the first line should be repeated

But it is a nice poem

BC Williams Tue Aug 09 2011, 07:46

Wow! I didn't even see that:-) Sorry, but it'll have to wait for another poem, Peter. I'm heading out to work. See ya

peewee Tue Aug 09 2011, 07:47

By by darling xxx

BC Williams Tue Aug 09 2011, 07:50

I didn't see this because you aren't truly repeating the first line, just the first few words, Peter. It's a thought provoking prompt, I'll say that! Good work . . . Bye bye:-)

peewee Tue Aug 09 2011, 07:53

True very true ha ha ha ha ha ha ha

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