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Post  Lucie Tue May 31 2011, 05:05

Now our Lucie Locket was far from pretty,
She was thin and pale- and incredibly zitty.
She'd lock herself shut, behind bathroom doors
To pick, scrub and cleanse those unblockable pores.
Where eventually sobbing- she's pull out the clippers
And ruthlessly mutilate herself with those snippers!
'Till an hour went by, and she'd stare in the morror
She was red, sore and sobbing, and looked even thinner
Then she'd open a cabnet and pull out a bottle..
Slapped it neat on her face and exclaimed, "That'll..
burn out inpurities, blackheads and each..."
(Except, on the bottle the label read BLEACH)
Little difference it made to her looks, it was true
It was hard to distinguish old scaring from new,
The moral is; Pick- and you'll pick yourself stupid,
And end up far worse like our silly Lucie did!!
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Post  mikeschultz Sat Feb 04 2012, 11:11

Good psychological piece. Dark with a purpose. Gripping. Thanks for sharing.
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