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Post  Lucie Mon May 30 2011, 06:51

Mumsy. Mom, oh mother of mine,
Please try to understand each line.
For you are all I have, that knows
This silliness we share, and so
I urge you ( like a daughter would)
To WRITE ME BACK! ( like a mother should)
I won't go quietly round the bend,
I'll TAKE YOU WITH ME....till the end!
You started this. It can't be finished,
And to ignore me, won't diminish
This little phase i'm going through,
Its just a prob' we'll have to chew.
I promise you, just as I'm better,
I'll try to lessen every letter.
But just f'now, oh mummy dear
Please help me, as I surely fear,
This sickness that I have s'not going
No matter how many pills i'm throwing-
down me neck- I'm getting sicker..
Write me soon, quick, quick..BE QUICKER!!..

Hello. I'm back- NO don't go leaving,
I'll be gone before you start on heaving.
I just popped by to let you know,
I'm trying hard to let THIS go..
And just to prove I am sincere
Hey look, I've gone..................
...............I am not HERE!!!!
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Post  peewee Tue May 31 2011, 13:25

Like the thought behind this xxxx
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