Seedling in the Earth

Sue McDonald Wed Mar 23 2011, 05:44

I must treat our heart and soul
like seedlings in the earth;
be kind to them, nourish them
with kindness and good thoughts.

Will feed them daily goodness
of happiness and thoughts,
of positives and promises
to sort out all our hurt.

Will walk with you along the beach,
holding strong in hand our heart.
Our soul and inner being
to complete and become a part ....

We're still a whole who loves so deep,
though inside pain makes me weep.
Wish I was not so soft and weak,
stand up stronger, stand and speak.

© 29/10/10 by Sue McDonald

BC Williams Thu Mar 24 2011, 07:14

You know Sue,

This is a most beautiful writing. I believe it's possibly the most wonderful writing I've seen from you to date. It's simplicity is evident - no need for flowery wordage or thought . . . just a very pretty account of your thoughts unfolding.

Take a second look, and let's speak in PM.

GREAT writing, girl:-)

bev

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