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Butterflies On A Buttercup
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Dori
Sue McDonald
Robert Anderson
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Butterflies On A Buttercup
Butterflies On A Buttercup
Today, I danced and touched myself
Left the groceries to them self
I left the wolves in their cave
And spread my wings to find the ocean
I found the ocean like a potion
As the sun danced down on ripples
As warmth cradled clouds
I could feel my nipples, rise
Then waves and a thousand horses ran over me
To fields of barley in the sand
A rainbow took my hand
And left me where I longed to be
Within my mind of you
A mirrored reflection came to me
Droplets of water married me
The way this life used to be
I swam where dolphins engulfed my soul
And loved me for my very goal, In life
I tasted the salt in the wind
And heard the sound of a mandarin
As I danced and flirted with the air
Pan pipes played without a care
Let the wind blow through my dress
And show my thighs in all digress
I’m still as sensual in this, my jest
To what will bring, or follow
I placed a lily in my hair
To the child with this inquisitive stare
But today I dance without a care
I will kiss her heart tomorrow
I read a book and lazed around
I drank some wine and heard some sound
Today the sound came once around, again
Never give in, and never give up
We are butterflies, on a buttercup
Poetry and painting © 2011 by Robert Anderson
Today, I danced and touched myself
Left the groceries to them self
I left the wolves in their cave
And spread my wings to find the ocean
I found the ocean like a potion
As the sun danced down on ripples
As warmth cradled clouds
I could feel my nipples, rise
Then waves and a thousand horses ran over me
To fields of barley in the sand
A rainbow took my hand
And left me where I longed to be
Within my mind of you
A mirrored reflection came to me
Droplets of water married me
The way this life used to be
I swam where dolphins engulfed my soul
And loved me for my very goal, In life
I tasted the salt in the wind
And heard the sound of a mandarin
As I danced and flirted with the air
Pan pipes played without a care
Let the wind blow through my dress
And show my thighs in all digress
I’m still as sensual in this, my jest
To what will bring, or follow
I placed a lily in my hair
To the child with this inquisitive stare
But today I dance without a care
I will kiss her heart tomorrow
I read a book and lazed around
I drank some wine and heard some sound
Today the sound came once around, again
Never give in, and never give up
We are butterflies, on a buttercup
Poetry and painting © 2011 by Robert Anderson
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Re: Butterflies On A Buttercup
Beautifully writen, I enjoyed reading this very much, well done and welcome to the site ..
Sue McDonald- Author
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Deep
This poem is a little deep for me. I do like the symbols you use to explain, though. I'm not a writer but I enjoyed reading it!
Have a good day.
Have a good day.
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Re: Butterflies On A Buttercup
Enjoy reading the poem Bobby, the picture is just a great as the poem.. :)
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Re: Butterflies On A Buttercup
Wow! Can there be any more said?
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coffee in a tea cup
Thank you so much for the lovely comments . It was written around cancer.
and the people that have to go through it for real .The painting took me around a month but the poem took five mins because it is part of life today. It is a scourge we have to live with. BEV? you know what it is like when we write real ??? we can write crap about landscapes and nice sky'S but death from this garbage is actually reality. If we can make a change to reality , through our art and poetry, then we we have done our jobs xxxxx
and the people that have to go through it for real .The painting took me around a month but the poem took five mins because it is part of life today. It is a scourge we have to live with. BEV? you know what it is like when we write real ??? we can write crap about landscapes and nice sky'S but death from this garbage is actually reality. If we can make a change to reality , through our art and poetry, then we we have done our jobs xxxxx
Re: Butterflies On A Buttercup
I may have lost my mojo Bobby:-) But yes, I do understand writing from the heart, finding the right words to express a bad situation. We writers of poetry have bags of tricks to innervate the emotions and deeper thoughts of our readers. If a piece touches the heart, than we've done our job. After all, actions have no voice in apathy . . .
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Re: Butterflies On A Buttercup
Your work really does inspire me:-) Great writing, Bobby!
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Re: Butterflies On A Buttercup
Well done matey XXXX
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Re: Butterflies On A Buttercup
Wonderfully written. Enjoyed your poem.
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