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The ultimate gift
peewee Sat Dec 25 2010, 10:10
The ultimate gift
Computer games galore
Different kinds of stink
Plentiful stocks of the wrong sized socks
And a board game to make you think
Tins of sweets and chocolate
A glass box full of ants
Something that smells like it died last year
And a string vest and some pants
A robot without batteries
A DVD of Top Gear
A voucher to go to McDonalds
And some cans of ginger beer
A monkey playing symbols
A remote controlled car
The latest new mobile phone
And some humbugs in a jar
To finish it all off
A kit for painting rocks
And all he wants to do
Is play with the bloody box
© 2010 Pee Wee
Computer games galore
Different kinds of stink
Plentiful stocks of the wrong sized socks
And a board game to make you think
Tins of sweets and chocolate
A glass box full of ants
Something that smells like it died last year
And a string vest and some pants
A robot without batteries
A DVD of Top Gear
A voucher to go to McDonalds
And some cans of ginger beer
A monkey playing symbols
A remote controlled car
The latest new mobile phone
And some humbugs in a jar
To finish it all off
A kit for painting rocks
And all he wants to do
Is play with the bloody box
© 2010 Pee Wee
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Re: The ultimate gift
Sue McDonald Sat Dec 25 2010, 17:15
bEAUTIFUL POEM Pete, and so very true....love it....Merry Christmas ! x 
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Re: The ultimate gift
peewee Sun Dec 26 2010, 00:11
This was one of my top heavy poems lol 
I strted at the end and then filled in the rest :Ha:
Thanks Sue xx
I strted at the end and then filled in the rest :Ha:
Thanks Sue xx
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Re: The ultimate gift
BC Williams Sun Dec 26 2010, 05:55
Reminds me when I was a kid . . . my mom would get me a doll for Christmas (you know, girls are supposed to like em?) but I'd remove the cloths and that'd be it:-) Good writing, Peter!
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