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Post  Mr Williams Tue Oct 19 2010, 21:50

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Windows


A wiser man than I once said,
' Eyes are windows to the soul.'
I never grasped that concept until gazing into yours.
I see wonder, wisdom, and enlightenment.

I see my sweetheart's love returned
like I never thought possible.
I see a beautiful woman,
growing younger by the minute.
A tender, loving heart . . caring and empathetic.

I see the sparkle of a million stars on a clear, moonless night,
your tears, like droplets of dew clinging to the petals of a rose.
Beautifully full, rich and strong eyes of my precious;
the reflection of a man who is finally becoming a man,
feeding from your goodness.

Caring and loving deeper than I have depth,
I yearn to hold you tight and tender,
safe-secure,
assuring you that I love you like no other
forever and always.

Never stagnant, ever changing:
my love for you grows stronger
with each passing breath . . ..

I love you, sweetheart

David


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Post  Sue McDonald Tue Oct 19 2010, 23:33

Oh wow !! such a romantic powerfull yet soft caring piece of writing .....love it well done David !
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Post  BC Williams Wed Oct 20 2010, 07:11

I love you honey . . . thank you for all you do to keep the home fires burning brightly:-)

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Post  Guest Wed Oct 20 2010, 10:13

Excellent poem David !
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Post  peewee Wed Oct 20 2010, 10:34

Ahh shucks what can I say that hasn't already been said

First class David matey
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Post  Guest Sun Nov 14 2010, 04:55

Oh I didn't see this one earlier. Wow! So breathtakingly beautiful! xx
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Post  alitnobani Tue Nov 23 2010, 14:28

I fell in love with this poem .. very nice
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Post  Fred West Wed Nov 24 2010, 01:09

great writing David
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