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Post  Sue McDonald Wed Dec 19 2012, 05:14

Why are  you in the Laptop ? 11611

Looking for my mummy,
she was in here yesterday
I saw her here with daddy,
now shes gone away.

I'll sit and wait here quietly,
just to see if they'll come back
I miss their hugs and cuddles
and jumping on dads back !

Well my eye's are getting sleepy,
my Charlie Bears asleep,
I guess they're having fun, like me,
So I'll wait untill next week.......

When they come home from holiday
upon that great big plane
then I can play and laugh with them
give them cuddles once again.


© by Sue McDonald.......for Miss Gabrielle ! xxxxx
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Post  mikeschultz Wed Dec 19 2012, 07:17

Absolutely sweet and so sad. As retired military, I've seen this scenario a time or two in one fashion or another, and you've captured a very real moment and shared it. Well done. Michael
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