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Post  Lucie Mon Aug 20 2012, 01:48

Come , visit in the garden
at the very break of dawn
And you will see the magic
of a new day as it's born

And in amongst the shaddows
of the flora are the beasts
arising from cold slumbers
to begin their morning feasts

The golden ball of sunshine
rises gently over all
repainting in the colours
As it sweeps o'er wall to wall

The tiny midges waken from
the grasses in the night
hovering at different levels
when all at once they take to flight

The spider's busy webbing
inbetween the legs of chairs
so intricate her masterpiece
To later catch her wares

The bluetits and the sparrows
parade about the tree
to the topmost of the branches
Chirping oh- so happily

And always on the panel
Of the fence, all fed and dressed
Rings the chorus of the Robin
As he sings his very best

The tiny buds of flowers
seem to quiver at their stem
As one by one they open
Unwrapping beauty once again

I love this gift of nature
That freely gives to all
And once you see it's splender
I know, you too, will fall...

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Post  jinettyx Mon Aug 20 2012, 04:49

Mummy and Uncle Pete are so proud of you Looby....xxxx Lol!!! group hug
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Post  RichieO Mon Aug 20 2012, 05:30

Very nicely written Lucie, a Dawning of a new day brings life to all it reaches. Well written...... sunny clapping clapping clapping clapping
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Post  Lucie Tue Aug 21 2012, 02:42

thank you.. so blessed to catch those few minutes of sanctuary EVERY morning with my first cuppa at the back door Very Happy
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Post  mikeschultz Wed Aug 22 2012, 14:42

Lucie,

Your poem is lovely, and in it you capture the very reasons I too enjoy the morning hours, sitting near my garden with my lap board, notebook, pen, and a cup of fresh made coffee. Thank you for reminding me.
clapping clapping clapping clapping clapping
Keep up the good work.

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