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Post  Lucie Sun Feb 26 2012, 11:51

When turning my head to silent thoughts
I recall of the times I let go, past.
The times I had only to reach, grab a hold
lest discouraged and doubting. Unsure of my grasp.

What might have turned circles of fortune for me
Had I the strength to persue and believe.
Taken a ride with my dreams in my reach
But I became who I was expected to be. Twas percieved.

The winds of time do blow a fury
Quick and mean their driving force
Where we must stand and be tested, cruely
Only the meak look back with remorse.
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Post  mikeschultz Sun Feb 26 2012, 12:45

Ah, the burdens of expectations, ours and theirs. A fine poem. Love the last line. Like a Star @ heaven Like a Star @ heaven Like a Star @ heaven
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Post  Lucie Sun Feb 26 2012, 13:53

Thank you kindly.
Your comments are very valued sunny
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