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Post  jinettyx Mon Jan 30 2012, 06:05

Competitive Behaviour


So when did this obsession start
Do tell me, don’t be shy
This competitive behaviour
To always do or die?

I commend your effort for trying
To get one over on me
But darling you must realise
It will never ever be.

For I am oh so cunning
And I know your little ploy
To always have the upper hand
You play me like a toy

You see my love, I know you well
We are so close, its true
So I have written this little ode
To get my own back over you.


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Post  Lucie Mon Jan 30 2012, 06:36

Oh I Soooooooooo love this one! fighting talk!!
prey, anyone I know or( did I annoy you in some way ):P
well written sausage x
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Post  Lucie Fri Feb 03 2012, 12:22

Not EVEN gonna try it
Foe no-one can compare
To odes from you,
Theses words are true,
You have a natural flair.

So don't go killing keyboards
By thwacking out a line
You're a Jin-genius
An asset to us,
At BP, you're top at Rhyme.
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Post  jinettyx Fri Feb 03 2012, 14:43

Haaahahaha! Gotcha!! Lol!
Just a li'l bit o' harmless fun with you hunni !!
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Post  RichieO Fri Feb 03 2012, 18:19

There you go you two, Lucie you should know your Mum by now....lol.
e the Odes though very good, nice to have some fun....!!!!! deep thought Very Happy
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Post  RichieO Fri Feb 03 2012, 18:31

To Ode, or not to Ode'
that's the Odie question
Whether to Ode or not
in the fields of all the Ode's
Be Old or new you will Ode
To keep your spirt high
Don't stop your lovely Odes
Cos, the fun of Odeing is good
And will keep you alive to write
Make Loopy Lou feel happy
and not blue, for she will Ode
To you as you will Ode to her.
Odie O, Odie hi don't stop
Just continue you to Ode.

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Post  Lucie Sat Feb 04 2012, 02:58

wow Richie, this is 'ode'lly clever of you!
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