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Raindrop
heavy is the rain drop
crashing on the delicate leaves
leaf arching back near breaking point
before launching itself to the breeze
Airbourne and splendid
like a glistening pearl
as the wind catches its skin
in a gust it did hurl
this droplet of pureness
natures clearest and fine
descends down the coils
of atwisting grape vine
at the tip of a leaf
in wavers in the balance
a moment of hopefulness
before accepting abidance
to the ground it hits hard
no soft cushion the grass
this beauty has shattered
like shards o'broken glass
a tear it does fall
for its pitying sake
that such beauty so brief
that this world needs to take.
crashing on the delicate leaves
leaf arching back near breaking point
before launching itself to the breeze
Airbourne and splendid
like a glistening pearl
as the wind catches its skin
in a gust it did hurl
this droplet of pureness
natures clearest and fine
descends down the coils
of atwisting grape vine
at the tip of a leaf
in wavers in the balance
a moment of hopefulness
before accepting abidance
to the ground it hits hard
no soft cushion the grass
this beauty has shattered
like shards o'broken glass
a tear it does fall
for its pitying sake
that such beauty so brief
that this world needs to take.
Lucie- Author
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Re: Raindrop
What a stunning piece ..... very well written my lovely!!!!
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Re: Raindrop
thankyou my flower x
Lucie- Author
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Re: Raindrop
Lovely use of nature to illustrate our human frailties. Well done.
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