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Post  Lucie Wed Nov 23 2011, 14:31

Poised......at the light switch..
Fingers froze, and hes-i-tate..
Toes are twitching, sctomache wretching
Why do I get in such a state?

The dark, it doesn't frighten me,
The door I prefer closed tight,
But what i fear- is very clear
lurks over there!... at night.

It's scaley claws are awaiting..
ready to spring into action,
At any attempt I get out of step
Grabbing my ankles, if close by a fraction!

It's HUGE , cold , black eyes
always starring........ and wide
I once peeked/held my breath
-met his glance, ..and then cried.

But today, I am strong!
I will leap, bound and conquer!
I'll plan it by seconds
To win. and live longer!

ok....I know i can do it
Its all in-my-head,
a run,three leaps a jump and then..
I'm tucked up SAFE in bed!
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Post  Lucie Fri Nov 25 2011, 15:19

1st paragraph * stomach*
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Post  RichieO Fri Nov 25 2011, 16:16

You like the scary stories Lucie, nice writing hope you don't go to witha scare...... Like Like Very Happy
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Post  jinettyx Sat Nov 26 2011, 01:06

Lucie...Dad is reading your work and loving it!!!
He secretly wishes you to write about him......well done cherub! xxxxxx
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Post  BC Williams Sun Nov 27 2011, 19:37

Marvelously neat writing! Lucie, you know how to drive a storyline! Great work sweets.

Hey Mr jinettyx . . . thanks for coming in to read:-)

Hugs, bev
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Post  Lucie Mon Nov 28 2011, 00:56

thank you Bev, so glad i can finally return to site now..don't know what's happened , but am grateful..can re-read everyones profiles for inspiration
lovin' it Like
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