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Lucie Mon Nov 21 2011, 04:19

Upon this baron lifeless land
my weary eyes look yonder,
sun masked. Air still. Alone, I stand
Only memories left to ponder.

Enclosed within a parallel
Tis' bleak. No future here.
A time I have known very well
My heart doth bleed a tear.

My hopes all dashed, My feelings trashed
My every being- crushed.
Never shall I love again
For now I've got it sussed.

jinettyx Mon Nov 21 2011, 15:10

Beautiful, but sombre..... heart

BC Williams Mon Nov 21 2011, 16:18

My Lord, you write so beautifully Lucie. I'm so sorry for the meaning behind, but the poem is just too lovely written.

Hugs

Cheryl Brickner Tue Nov 22 2011, 13:44

Lucie,
Just Beautiful, but so sad. You WILLL find love again!
I lost my highschool sweetheart to a car accident. But, God did bring me another soul mate!
Hugs,
Cheryl

Lucie Wed Nov 23 2011, 11:31

thank you ladies for your lovely comments..i happened to just tap on the keys at 6am and the words just poured over the screen...:P

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