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Post  Lucie Fri Nov 11 2011, 13:06

Dearest daddy, hear my plea
Where were you when I was three?
Tell me. Were you sure of knowing,
What you did, where you were going..?
And as you turned and closed the door
I never saw your face, at four.
I wondered if you'd soon arrive
A birthday wish when I was five.
But soon I learn life has it's kicks
Forgetting you at the age of six.
had you ever wondered whether
Our lives may of been good together?
Still. We live our seperate lives
Better left, deceet and lies...
However, should your conscious call
I live happily ever after all!!!!!
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Post  jinettyx Sun Nov 13 2011, 16:25

Well done Kiddo!! Like deep thought
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Post  Cheryl Brickner Sat Nov 19 2011, 08:28

Lucie,
Awe, that made me cry......
I am glad you are happy without him....
Beautifully written!
Hugs,
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Post  jinettyx Sat Nov 19 2011, 13:34

It's ok Cheryl....she has a wonderful Daddy now who's been with us since she was four....I guess you never stop wondering..xxx Very Happy
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Post  RichieO Sun Nov 20 2011, 15:12

That was a very sad beginning with a very happy ending Lucie. Your poem comes from the heart and I am glad you found a better Dad. I know the feeling of being a Stepdad, my Lisa has accepted me from the beginning and that makes me happy.....A credit to your Mum for finding John..
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