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THE CASTLE
This castle was built in sixteen hundred and two,
by a man who loved his new bride.
He wanted her to have the best of everything,
right down to the diamonds on her crown.
They had lived in their castle for only a year,
no children have they.
When in the middle of the night an intruder broken in,
The man tired to protect his wife,
when he was killed.
A saber through the heart is how he died,
that night she of a broken heart.
For they had loved each other,
with all their might.
Since that night of untimely death,
the man and woman lives there still.
Forever keeping out anyone,
who tries to take over their home.
They walk the corridors at midnight,
the hour they had died.
Just moaning and lighting the candles,
on the walls scaring the intruders until they leave.
They will be forever happy in....
their castle on Edinburg's Hill....
by a man who loved his new bride.
He wanted her to have the best of everything,
right down to the diamonds on her crown.
They had lived in their castle for only a year,
no children have they.
When in the middle of the night an intruder broken in,
The man tired to protect his wife,
when he was killed.
A saber through the heart is how he died,
that night she of a broken heart.
For they had loved each other,
with all their might.
Since that night of untimely death,
the man and woman lives there still.
Forever keeping out anyone,
who tries to take over their home.
They walk the corridors at midnight,
the hour they had died.
Just moaning and lighting the candles,
on the walls scaring the intruders until they leave.
They will be forever happy in....
their castle on Edinburg's Hill....
Last edited by Dori on Thu Apr 05 2012, 04:28; edited 1 time in total
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Re: THE CASTLE
Really nice Dori
I have been to a Castle this week
I have been to a Castle this week
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Re: THE CASTLE
Thanks Peter, I seen that, will you be going to Edinburg Castle ?
I hopew you are having an awesome time, that the weather is excellent for you...
I hopew you are having an awesome time, that the weather is excellent for you...
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Oh yeah, did you see my poem "The Castle" it's the first of this series....
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No more Castles this trip Dori, and the weather is grim but never mind lol
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I hope the the weather will clear up so you can really enjoy your trip.....well there is a lot of other sights to see, like the green hills and many other places...
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Beautiful Dori, I love castles and all the history they hold ....nicely writen
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Thanks Sue, this just part 2 of the CASTLE, the first one is called "THE CASTLE...glad you enjoyed reading "THE CATLE: TWO"
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Thanks Sue, this just part 2 of the CASTLE, the first one is called "THE CASTLE...glad you enjoyed reading "THE CATLE: TWO"
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