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Post  Jenna French Sun Jul 03 2011, 14:23

I wish I knew what I had done wrong
He treats me so mean I fear I will soon be gone
Do I love him? yes very much
Yet I seem to be the last thing he wants to touch
I know he loves me or at least think he did
Now his feelings for me seem to have ran and hid
Without a key to open their door
I fear he has feelings for me no more
I fear for me he does no longer care
Every time I look he is never there
I have tried to talk be nice the lot
Yet I just seem to get forgot
What to do I just do not know
Wish I knew which way to go
I feel as if I am lost and far away
Love has gone and had it's day
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Post  peewee Fri Oct 14 2011, 07:49

I do hope this Isn't true
Lovely writing dear lady
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Post  BC Williams Sat Oct 15 2011, 05:56

Love can be the most brilliant thing, or can be a burden - like something dank and unforgiving lurking in the corner. I feel for you Jenna. It's so hard to still love, but know your intended has lost their vision of that love.

Ask yourself: is it worth my time and energy? Can my mourning bring love back to it's beginning? Will it really matter months from now, or should I realise my needs might be fulfilled someplace else?

Only you know the answers to those questions. Peace of mind can be elusive, or it can be a conscious decision. Life is short, as they say . . . and it's not easily maneuvered. Reconnect with your mojo girl.

BIG hug
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Post  Jenna French Mon Oct 17 2011, 05:22

im sorry to say peter its all very true :( xx
i will work it out bev and be back to myself soon xx
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