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Lost love
Lucie Fri Jan 04 2013, 11:23
You are my long term satisfaction
When I'm sad I look to find
You. My happy, short distraction
In the pocket of my mind.
Long-past moments remembered thee
That once had made me smile
I linger here, temporily
And stay with you a while.
Nevermore I'll see your face
Nor fall into your eyes
But keep you in my heart, it's pace
drowns out my sullen cries.
(c) Lu
When I'm sad I look to find
You. My happy, short distraction
In the pocket of my mind.
Long-past moments remembered thee
That once had made me smile
I linger here, temporily
And stay with you a while.
Nevermore I'll see your face
Nor fall into your eyes
But keep you in my heart, it's pace
drowns out my sullen cries.
(c) Lu
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Re: Lost love
mikeschultz Fri Jan 04 2013, 15:34
Ah, Lost Love, an old wound that still hurts. Bless you. You've captured well the hopelessness of the pain ever going away. Thanks. Mike
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Re: Lost love
Lucie Tue Jan 08 2013, 08:39
Thank you Mike, for all your lovely comments. much appreciated
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Re: Lost love
Sue McDonald Fri Jan 11 2013, 03:05
Awwww Lucie, so beautiful ....Bless you ...I love the way this poem places an instant image in your mind ! Well Done 
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